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Tuesday, September 26, 2017

this writing is about 'Camps have no educational Value and should not happen'

My class had to choose that if we want to do agree or disagree on our writing and what I choose agree because all of these three reasons.

Would you like to see people be sad and can’t go to camp?

I strongly agree because all students won’t be aloud to go to camp because they are to poor and because they might have allergies also they might of got bullied  at  school and then they don’t won’t to go to camp because it might get of hand on camp.

Firstly I strongly agree believe that kids should not go to camp because their Mom's or
Dad’s do not have the money to pay for their children's camps and their
 boss doesn't pay them that much money.
There are people that don’t have jobs another reason why is because they
live with nothing in it and they are too lazy to anything.

Secondly I strongly agree that kids should not go
on camp because kids have all kind of  
allergies which some are very dangerous like thing like this eggs.
fish,milk,hazelnuts,walnuts,almonds,
peanuts,shellfish,shrimps,mussels,crab,and also wheat that
were some allergies that are in all kind of food which is
often in shops where u can find them.

Finally I strongly agree that all kids should not go on camp
because a bully could pick on and then all sorts of things
can happen to you. You can be mocked and made fun of
that whole camp and won’t want to go back to another one or school.

So these three reasons explain why
I strongly believe that students should
not go on camps. First because they
can’t afford to pay for camp because they are too poor.Secondly
because  kids might have allergies that like some are really dangerous. Lastly
because that a bully might start bullying a innocent little girl or boy which is very cruel.

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