Can it ice cream?

For the past two days me and my group made ice cream it was really cool, interesting, and fun.

What were we learning to do? To understand the science behind making ice cream.

What did you learn? I learnt to make ice cream very easy, I learnt to use less products to make a simple delicious breakfast ice cream, and that ice cream can be a science experiment. 

What did you do? me and my group got the mixture of ice cream, salt ice and the breakfast ingredients to put into the ice cream mixture. We tipped our breakfast ingredients into the ice cream mixture and celled the bag up nice and tight so the mixture of ice cream wouldn´t spill so we put the mixture of ice cream with the breakfast ingredients inside of the mixture and put it into a big bag that had salt ice to make the ice cream mixture a solid so we celled the salt ice bag nice and tight so no water comes dripping out because of the ice cubes melting. We put a 5 minute timer on and then shook the bag for 5 minutes straight so the ice cream won´t be a liquid anymore it will turn into a solid. After shaking it for 5 minutes we tipped the salt ice out on the concrete which mad the concrete white but then we went back inside opened the ice cream bag up and it was still liquidy which means we had to have more salt ice but our hole class room didn´t have enough for all the groups because we only had 1 bag of ice which wasn´t enough so we poured it on our plates we ate it and gave it to the other 3 groups that we were competing against in our block of groups. Our group gave some of our ice cream to our teacher ad said it was very breakfasty once every one had a taste test we scored each others point 1 to 5. My group came second with another group and one other group lost and another group came first. 

What was your over all reflection of the experience? That it was so good it was very breakfasty but it was really like a breakfast smoothie so next time we need more salt ice to make it become a breakfast ice cream.

10 year old party

Today we had a 10 year old party that we had to go it was a dress up party my family was going as minions it was stressful for my mum to get the costumes for us our hole family had the stuff ready except for Ngaere my little sister my mum bought a full costume of a minion and it was coming on the day before the party but it didn´t come on that day so we waited until the next day which is going to be the party day. In the morning my mum and sister went down to our nans to go see if the minion costume got delivered but it wasn´t so we had to go and by my sister a yellow Tukau legacy top and we all went as Maori minions my mum said. We got ready we went to go pick up Ngaereś t-shirt season gave it to us we said thank you and gave some fry bread and we took pictures which was annoying.
We went to the party 1 hour earlier than when it actually started so that was fun!!. I got dressed out of my pants that I was wearing because it got really annoying so yeah. We partied hard with my little sisters friend and with Olivia, had heaps of food, chilled on the couch, played with people at the party and watched a interesting kids movie with the little kids then my family went home.  THE END!!
Why I chose to write this? because it was something that happened in the weekend, it was very simple to write about and it was something that I didn´t have to over think.
What I found easy and hard? I found it easy because it was simple to write about and I didn´t find anything hard.
What is my next step? My paragraphs are deliberately sequenced and structured I use a range of language features that link ideas, to enhance the flow of the entire text.