This is my Metaphor poem we talked about our mum and what shes like to me,My dad,My brother and my teacher and what I feel and know about them because other people know and what I feel about my family and teacher. A metaphor poem is a person that you describe and put metaphors in ,what there like .This is my poem. if this was your metaphor poem who would you do it on and what do you feel,what there like ?
Friday, March 16, 2018
This is my Metaphors poem
This is my Metaphor poem we talked about our mum and what shes like to me,My dad,My brother and my teacher and what I feel and know about them because other people know and what I feel about my family and teacher. A metaphor poem is a person that you describe and put metaphors in ,what there like .This is my poem. if this was your metaphor poem who would you do it on and what do you feel,what there like ?
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Hi Maria,Im kahlen from st patricks primary school.I like how you have presented this but maybe next time you could work on your spelling
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comment above. You have created a great poem and described these people well using metaphors. Just need to fix up spelling.
ReplyDeleteHi Miria,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you described people close to you using metaphors and comparing them to things in real life. I can really see your teacher as a prancing cheetah! Maybe next time though, you could double check your spelling. Overall, I think this is a really descriptive poem.
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Hi Miria, It's Sachary and I'm just here to tell you that I really like how the way you described your friends, family and teacher and the words you use to describe them, just make sure that you check your spelling.
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