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Monday, December 3, 2018

10 year old party

Today we had a 10 year old party that we had to go it was a dress up party my family was going as minions it was stressful for my mum to get the costumes for us our hole family had the stuff ready except for Ngaere my little sister my mum bought a full costume of a minion and it was coming on the day before the party but it didn´t come on that day so we waited until the next day which is going to be the party day. In the morning my mum and sister went down to our nans to go see if the minion costume got delivered but it wasn´t so we had to go and by my sister a yellow Tukau legacy top and we all went as Maori minions my mum said. We got ready we went to go pick up NgaereÅ› t-shirt season gave it to us we said thank you and gave some fry bread and we took pictures which was annoying.
We went to the party 1 hour earlier than when it actually started so that was fun!!. I got dressed out of my pants that I was wearing because it got really annoying so yeah. We partied hard with my little sisters friend and with Olivia, had heaps of food, chilled on the couch, played with people at the party and watched a interesting kids movie with the little kids then my family went home.  THE END!!
Why I chose to write this? because it was something that happened in the weekend, it was very simple to write about and it was something that I didn´t have to over think.
What I found easy and hard? I found it easy because it was simple to write about and I didn´t find anything hard.
What is my next step? My paragraphs are deliberately sequenced and structured I use a range of language features that link ideas, to enhance the flow of the entire text.

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