Free Writing
There is a mystery island just trying to get found by lovely people to own
There is clouds swaying back and forwards through the sky
There are people sitting on the island sucking in the beautiful sight
The water is as clear as the sky ready to be swam in
The palm trees are as green as grass
The rocks at the background looks like coal you see at the train station
Kia ora, My name is Imogen and I am a year 6 student from Paihia School.
ReplyDeleteI like your free writing picture and writing because you have painted a clear picture in my mind of what the island looks like. Next time you could add in some punctuation in your writing. Did you enjoy writing this story?