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Monday, November 5, 2018

Free writing

Once upon a time there was a lady that lived in the woods she was 35 years old her name was Samantha she was so angry and sad about her family dying in a fire she use to live in at an old place called woodman road she has never been there since the fire and she was the only one that got out of the fire she didn't know who started it but she did know that it wasn't an accident. She was 30 at the time she had 4 kids and a husband she had so much love for them. Once the house caught on fire she went to go and run for her life but there was a house she found in the middle of the woods and there was a young family in there but she stormed into the house and found a gun right next to the door locked and loaded she fired at the family killing them one by one without even thinking of what she got herself into as a mother that just lost her only family that was alive.She had been living in that house that she just killed people in for 5 years and never went outside.She became a wanted lady but no one got to find her so she went outside and said that she need to change her life around so she gave herself in to the cops and she got charged with murder and stayed in jail for 10 years and once she finished her years of being in jail she went to get her life into order and she became a millionaire she helped the poor, she  got some workers to clean around the world and she was everybody's  hero and she still regrets what she did 10 years ago. So we as a class had to write every Monday to learn and to get better at writing basically.

2 comments:

  1. That is an extremely sad story Miria. There are a few places in here where you could add a little more description to paint a picture in the reader's mind. What did she do when the fire started, how/what did she feel?

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    1. I forgot to say, I like your story line and flow, as well as the twist in the middle. :)

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